Ring

by Steven Topaz   Sep 4, 2008


A promise never ending,
But a memory never forgetting.
This life of pain
Will never be the same.

So much thought
Into one little ring,
Love saught
To make my heart sing.

A promise never ending
But a memory never forgetting.
Thy broken heart,
Thus back at the start.

Mending a broken heart.
Mending a solemn start.

So much lost in that little ring.
Why does life bring such things.
Never knew that a piece of metal,
A heart or two could do me through.

Lost your hand..
My last stand.
I need a hand..
Broken..Crying..
May someone end my choking.
Praying..Dieing..
May this heart beat again..
Where has my love been..

A brand new start..
A brand new start..
Reset.
Never let.
Someone break your heart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow!! nice job. i felt ur emotion n feeling in this poem. i love it. awesome job.

    TAke care.
    Frenchy =)

  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    You never fail to impress me..it's unique but a heartfelt poem...the sincerity is really visualized...keep it up..

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    AWW! i can't say i 100% relate because i've never had my heart broken but this was full of so much emotion that i felt the message you were trying to convey.

    i loved:

    A brand new start..
    A brand new start..
    Reset.
    Never let.
    Someone break your heart.

    another great poem hon!

  • 16 years ago

    by RussianRendezvous

    Very sincere and emotional. There is truly a lesson to be learned here. You have to learn to live and dream before you go off and find yourself in love. superb<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked it great job!

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