Great job. well done x

I can relate tot he words in this poem, and the situation described.

I think it is very realistic as to how it feels to be abused, and then watch them as they get away with it. In your poem, you have shown us how it affects your mind, and happiness and how you feel there is never a way out. I think it shows the battle we face as survivors, that we want to move on, but sometimes also want to give up.

I like the rhyming, because it reminds me of how I used to write.

you raised a lot of questions typical to this situation too, like what they think, feel, will they ever reply, admit? Also, what happens when they stop hurting you? do they move on to someone else etc. All these are thoughts that remain long after the abuse is over.

Very raw poem. I am glad I discovered it.