Don't pretend, your word, so strong.

by Fantasy   Sep 4, 2008


Smear the black ink,
So no one else can see.

Don't pretend,
That you can read me.
The words keep taunting me,
They haunt me.

Your words they stay,
Let's not delay,
Keep your memory close,
But erase the days.

So strong,
What a beautiful song,
You are the chorus,
That plays in my mind.

Very short, but it came from my mind in like 3 minutes XD. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee comment and rate, tell me what you think, all comments welcome, unless they are very hateful!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by lost in lovee

    Ii lyked it alot! (:
    my favorite part was

    "Your words they stay,
    Let's not delay,
    Keep your memory close,
    But erase the days."

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    It sounds a bit rocky im sorry for saying that, but i appreciate ur poems coz i know ur effort its just my own opinion. its a bid rocky coz the words has a deep meaning but over all i didnt get the whole meaning of it, but though still good 4/7

  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    This is pretty cute. It makes you feel warm and fuzzy at the end. Though I get the feeling that's not quite what you were aiming for.
    It had good flow, and the language was okay.
    It's so short I can't pick much room for improvment. Anyway, good job, 5/5.

    jess ~

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