This had a really nice flow to it....good job!

I am very pleased with this poem. It's hearfelt and sad. Hopefully not as true as it seems to be. I love that the idea and purpose of the poem is carried throughout the entire write. Your feelings are clear and strong. It's simple, yet effective. The one thing that I like the most out of it all is that you have cleared admitted to your inability with grammar and spelling, but still you write because it is in your heart. I will agree with you on that though, it was a little difficult with the errors, but nonetheless it was well written and still easily pieced together despite your errors. Great job.

I have not read any of your other poems yet but based on this single poem I've noticed there is no structure to your writing. In other words, I myself prefer to have four lines in each stanza that I write. That is more or less my style of writing, but I think that if you created your own structure that best suits your personality it would give it an easier flow. It allows pauses where they may need to be.......hope this helps ya and keep writing.

Cool poem dude!!!! LOL