Comments : First meet one raining day.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    What a beautiful poem.....One of those memories that stays in your heart forever.....bringing you smiles for many years to come.
    Great Job!
    LOve Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    To me, the best poets are those who make you live in their poetry..and I guess you did that to me =))
    I can imagine the love you hide in this poem, and the imaginary here is amazingly penned !

    I love romance under the rain without umbrellas :D hehe, that seems so lovely !!
    keep writing
    great piece
    xxx