I liked the title of this poem. Very nice. The whole poem is very touchy and sensitive. Liked to read this kind of emotional writing. Good work... good poem!

Beautifully penned stanzas. expression of thoughts is really good.
'Your tears drop on the yellow sand
Earth sucks the pain your heart
You are alone in the Shadow land
Keep walking but no one is beside
You carry a burlap sack with you'

loved this stanza. wonderful writing!!