I noticed that 51 people have viewed this poem and I understand why there are as yet no comments as I found this to deep for me and I could not get a jist or a thread on what you base this, it is like no 'Hotel' I have ever stayed at? It confused me yet I read it over and over and I am still confused? sorry I could not give a score even if its meter seemed okay after my fourth reading. Ray S

Well......I get it.....'-)
and this is the most extraordinary poetic rendering of coming forth through the twilight of dreamy awakening into day consciousness I have ever read...
I can actually sense your inspiration and the insistant need to write this before it floated away (like dreamy insight often does)...and then, read aloud...wow!
exquisite, absolutely exquisite.....

It's a keeper for me...I'll be sharing with friends...

Even though I am going to be withdrawing from this site personally, I will drop in to read Your work...

Wow! i love this!!! its really good!

Maybe one day I write freeverse as beautiful as this

This is great work