A Bleeding Black Rose

by Steven Topaz   Sep 5, 2008


An empty light,
Will show your fight..
So much pain..
It's all the same..

Cry here
My black rose
Show me where
My world goes.

We will walk
into the night
The devils Talk,
No angels in sight.

So many thorns
They burn and bleed
A drop of blood
Is all you need

So many scars
and memories
My Bleeding Black Rose
It's you and me.

Bleeding forever
Our love never severed.
As we crave a dry rain
To wash away our pain.

I stand here staring.
At your blood stained petal.
I stand here crying.
Watching you,Slowly dying.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    Great poem, i loved it(:

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    An interesting poem because it was very different and unique. and i mean that in a really positive way. devils, angels, roses, pain, light, rain, blood, memories all in one poem. great. i liked the last stanza best.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Oh.. wow. this is amazing.. it's like how feel sumtimes well usually all the time. Im dying n bleeding inside. i love it. Awesome job here! keep it up!

    Take care,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by i care about him

    Beautiful analogy. Very well written poem. Great word choice 5/5 Keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    So many scars
    and memories

    I have somany scars that I can't explain. I wish I was never that way. But I thought your poem was very good.

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