Wishing Well

by Melissa   Sep 5, 2008


I keep falling
in deeper water,
sinking like a desirous penny
to the bottom of your well
where pretty things
no longer thrive
and love is
a shade of gray

I'm swimming in the mouth
of murky dreams
and my heart
is no longer transparent,
she's wading
in a smutty film
of verity

how ugly

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  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    "I'm swimming in the mouth
    of murky dreams"

    Wow! How do you come up with this stuff? It's absolutely brilliant!
    I adore the opening stanza too, just awesome all the way around!

  • 16 years ago

    by limp

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  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    A smutty film of verity - what turn of phrase!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Suicide

    A very well structured poem, filled with emotion (:
    {rated a 5}

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