Wow hats off to Michael talk about brave of heart,man what a difficult project to tackle, and an excellent job you did. I do know the style but did not have the time to check it as you have requested, i did notice one or two sticky bits but my man you ought to be very proud of this poem, i thought it to be very well written and you stuck to your subject with tenacity, Excellent write 5/5, Well done

Grant

A very interesting poem . It does look like it is a difficult type to write. I Like it. I think this is the first time I have seen this type of poem. It was very good.

That is amazing a-z

Not knowing the form it looks good to me. Only thing I see is your word choice could have been better in a couple places.

Oh thats cool