by Natalie Sep 5, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Pink sways slashed across darkening blue velvet skies, |
Loved the way you wrote it.. |
You have a realy good poem here. I liked it a lot. It was good length poem (not too long not too short) really nice read. |
by jutt
Wow, I really love this one it gets the point accross well. |
by Cindy
Congrats on the win :) |
I think it's a wonderful poem. my favorit line was: |