by Nee
I think this is my first poem to read for you. |
by Mr. Darcy
Natale, |
by Sourav
I appreciate your thoughts. So much of discrimination and dividing games are going on through this world. There's no respect for mankind. for nature and for God too! Everything nowadays is so materialistic. People don't have time to think about anything but their material interests. More they don't care to think. |
by Sourav
Many congratulations for winning the contest!! You deserve this! I'm so happy to see this poem on contest winner page! |
by Jemma
I absolutely loved this, the message, the language and the format. It worked wonderfully. I really cannot get some of your phrases out of my head. It was a very moving poem. It flows excellently as well, which is a great feat with free verse. You don't have the crutch of rhyme and you've done it really well. |
I think it's a wonderful poem. my favorit line was: |
by Cindy
Congrats on the win :) |
by jutt
Wow, I really love this one it gets the point accross well. |
You have a realy good poem here. I liked it a lot. It was good length poem (not too long not too short) really nice read. |
Loved the way you wrote it.. |