Hey, you. remember you is not alone. i am here. and everyone else. always. remember that, k? good.
anyway, good poem.

O wow Sad stuf.. But noone is ever really alone...

Your despcritions were very good. Your rhyming was good and consisent within the stanza. You got across your point or meaning for writing this piece.
But emotions were very well shown.
God JOb.