A very bitter and sad poem. I have a feeling this is about one of your parents.
The love they deny us is the one we need the most as a child, but also as we mature.
If I am right, I can understand you anger and relate to it 100%
This poem was brought to my attention by a friend in my poetry club and she is right, it is a very good poem:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

OOoh!! sometimes i dont get it!!
why do parents bring children if they wont take very good care after them!!?!!

i'm so sry for you...
but i'm pretty sure ur parent did care
and they didnt mean to break their promises,
and ofcourse they are sry for not being around,
but u shouldnt wait for any1 still, u shouldnt allow any1 to be able to let you down...

and dunt cry for any1 ur tears r precious and they should be out for someone precious as well...wish u happiness in ur life...

u nicely expressed ur feelings in the poem, well-written

keep writing...