My Mr. Right

by Kayla   Sep 6, 2008


Pulling down my veil,
Standing here at this church.
Sealing our love with a single kiss,
No longer do I have to search.

Running out smiling, hand in hand,
As the white doves fly in the air.
Taking our place inside the car,
Wiping the rice out of your hair.

I never thought today would come,
Time flew by so fast.
Never have I wanted anything more,
Than for this one moment to last.

Your eyes hold it all,
Every thing I'll need to know.
I'm gonna embrace our future tightly,
Hoping you also won't let go.

I reach over to touch your face,
Find you still there beside me.
This is actually happening,
My reality feels just like a dream.

Tears of happiness began to fall,
I reassure you that I'm okay.
It all just seems so perfect,
It couldn't of been a better day.

We talk about what lies ahead,
As we hold each other tight.
Cinderella may have Prince Charming,
But I've found my Mr. Right.

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Written: 9/3/08
Submitted: 9/6/08

~Kayla~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    Kayla Kayla Kayla.... How do you do it?
    I reallt love your poetry. Your awesome!
    I love the emotion in this piece and I was able to picture everything. It gave me chills. I'm talking on the phone with my friend and I read this poem to her... she loved it! She says your awesome!

    Love ya!
    10/10 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a lovely tale of fairytale moment. You have described to well the walk to the wedding car, together with the thoughts, some happy, others apprehensive and all completely natural.

    This stanza hold the true weight of this poem, well for me anyway:

    Your eyes hold it all,
    Every thing I'll need to know.
    I'm gonna embrace our future tightly,
    Hoping you also won't let go.

    We all hope that waht we invest in will work out well for us. A marriage made in heaven..I sincerly hope so!!

    Well done on writing this and capturing more than the image played out. I believe good poetry leaves the reader pondering between and beyond the poets lines. You did for me and I am pleased that you have the skill to do so! :)

    Michael

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