This Time She Fell Too Hard

by ShootingStar   Sep 6, 2008


*This is about me. I thought I can trust this boy as my best friend. He disappointed me. He doesn't care anymore.*

Yes,they were once meant everything to each other.
Just not for now,
This guy ignores her,
he keeps letting her down.

She tried so hard,
but she's never good enough.
She paid everything for sh*ts,
for a guy like this.

She wonders why,
why he forgets her?
why she loves him that much?
why, like nothing has happened?

She's tired she shuts off her feelings.
Her heart can't take this anymore,
because this time she fell too hard.
She shouldn't care that much.

She's given up
she's waited too long enough.
For one request,boy please,
please remember this girl who loved you way too much.

(c)Grace Li,05.09.2008.

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  • 14 years ago

    by DoRk

    Wow know that feeling it sucks
    U may not be able to control ur heart but u can control ur mind
    Always tell urself ull b ok n get by
    Great poem

  • 15 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Good job.
    this is very sad tho.
    im sorry something like this happened to you.
    great peom tho.
    5/5.
    keep writing.
    anp<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyssi Lori

    Your poem is okay. I mean, you'll get better as you write more. My poems kinda sounded like that too when I first started writing. But things will inspire you more as you go along and it'll all fit together smoothly. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Faten

    Hey no offence but your poem doesnt really mesh well. the concept is good though. i bet if you work on it a little it'd be great. 2/5