by ShootingStar Sep 6, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
*This is about me. I thought I can trust this boy as my best friend. He disappointed me. He doesn't care anymore.* |
by DoRk
Wow know that feeling it sucks |
Good job. |
by Lyssi Lori
Your poem is okay. I mean, you'll get better as you write more. My poems kinda sounded like that too when I first started writing. But things will inspire you more as you go along and it'll all fit together smoothly. =] |
by Faten
Hey no offence but your poem doesnt really mesh well. the concept is good though. i bet if you work on it a little it'd be great. 2/5 |