Comments : What a sad life for this girl.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Aww wow Amber, so sad. It is a sad life for the girl, so upsetting that no one loved her. So sad that she died, and wrote a story in her own blood. Just wow, good poem. Like always Amber ^.^ lol

    "She would run up the stairs and to her room in tears.
    She wished she would die but those are only prayers.
    So in her roo, in her corner she would be crying her eyes out.
    What a sad life for this girl, and all we think she can do is pout."

    I think you meant 'Room' lol But other then that one spelling mistake, the whole poem was good.

    Great jod Amber.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Wow very dark, sad and gloomy... i wonder what this is inspired from...
    good job, dear...
    you are very good with words.

    keep up the good work, amber.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww i'm so sorry... such a beautifully written poem, very sad though and great emotion!