Artificial Waterfalls

Interesting write, that kept me interested in what you were going to write next. This isn't usually the type of poem I'd read or write, but you did an excellent job at your descriptions, this piece held great depth. Good work, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

This is somewhat morbid but i liked it. there was once a time when similar words were stirring around in my mind. sometimes there are things in our lives that just stick. "marks that we just can't erase." but that doesn't mean that we can't move on from them and bring fourth a more positive outlook on life. you yourself as a human being are perfect as is, there's no need to be anything that you're not.

"Bathed in lack of confidence
and force fed my own lies"

are my favorite lines. i can relate to the lack of confidence reference. good job. 5/5

Oh goodness. this was very disturbing to read. i hope you don't really think this. its so sad and very depressing to read. gah. very sad. well i truly hope you are okay, and you know im always here for you. i must say however, the title really captured my attention and lured me in here to read your poem. you are an amazing poet. no more depressive stuff, please. i love cutesy love poems. let me see that side again! =] this was good though, the word choice again blew me away completely. it adds a lot of meaning to the poem. well done 5/5