It's always interesting to see what one can come up with when they write from their heart completely. but, I really loved reading something written from your heart. it was truly heartfelt, so sad, but yet.. you managed to pull it off very well. the vocabulary was outstanding. "heart fragments flying everywhere" in the second stanza i believe, really captured my attention. the word choice was flawless in this piece and added to the piece a lot actually. you did a wonderful job. sad poem, but nonetheless a very good write. 5/5. (: