Comments : I want him

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Your poem is good sort of sentimental and sweet , it flowed quite well but you lost the rhyme here and there otherwise i enjoyed it

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Wishing you best of luck! I thought it was well put, and agree with Grant that it flowed very nicely. A good read.

  • 13 years ago

    by tae

    Good poem can i be him