by ABake Sep 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Smiling through the tears, not because I want to but because you made me promise I would smile when you left... Why did you leave baby? Oh, I miss that annoying nickname terribly; shaking from the tears and aching from the loss- |
by dora
Aww that was really sad. lot of emotion in this one. |
I really enjoyed this poem so much because everybody who has ever been in love can relate to it so well. Sometimes when it's all over we wish that we could just have a little bit more time to prove our love or maybe say/do something we never got around to doing. Excellent job 5/5 GG23 |