I think you have done a really good job with this poem, the only thing I advice you to do is revise the grammar for I think you might a have a mistake or two. Other than that, it is a strong deep poem with a powerful meaning. Great job, keep it up.

Pulled me right in....good read....

Very interesting poem. And very enjoyable indeed. Well written!

A very powerful plea, Sara...and a beautiful one at that too! I loved this free verse:)

Hugs,

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