Why cant i go back

by cupcake   Sep 7, 2008


It was just a phone call
this wasn't suppose to happen
why did this happen
should i have tried harder
its all my fault
why does it hurt so much
i wanna rip my heart out
i wanna see my blood gush out
i wanna see feel the pain
i wanna hurt
why did i do this to you
why cant i go back
why cant i change the past
why did i open my heart up
i can feel my heart beat
i cat stand it
i don't wanna feel anymore
i wanna go back
when my heart was black as Cole

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal

    Hey.... good write.... i get you its hard to open up and then when you do your shot down for who and what you are.... completely understand.... not all poems have to rhyme so dont worry.... many great poems dont rhyme.... all i can suggest is before you post it hav a quick reread for spellin.... but other then that i really liked it and understand....

    Crystal....
    oh and thanks for the comment....

  • 16 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Its a nice poem!
    you have potential... but try arranging the stanza;z more... and try to make it rhyme...
    the poem was like you were talking , more than writting a poem! but its good, u have the potential, i like the idea, just try to go more deep, with words...

    keep it up

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