Its a nice poem!
you have potential... but try arranging the stanza;z more... and try to make it rhyme...
the poem was like you were talking , more than writting a poem! but its good, u have the potential, i like the idea, just try to go more deep, with words...

keep it up

Hey.... good write.... i get you its hard to open up and then when you do your shot down for who and what you are.... completely understand.... not all poems have to rhyme so dont worry.... many great poems dont rhyme.... all i can suggest is before you post it hav a quick reread for spellin.... but other then that i really liked it and understand....

Crystal....
oh and thanks for the comment....