A very sad write,missing someone is an unbearable ache,It does however lessen in time.A heartfelt piece.

A beautiful though sad piece of writing. Truly filled with so much of emotions captured within each line..... The opening stanza was enough to capture the readers attention and have them glued to this masterpiece right till the end. Excellent work! 100/5 from me.

I agree, really great writing...5/5....this has so much meaning and so much emotion into it.

"the memories are vivid
And evoke terrible pain
They hit me like stones
And fall like the rain"

My favorite part of your poem!
Great writting keep it up. it's very sad yet beautiful.

*Ada*
*aBSwaBHiaPL*

Great Job I really like this one lots of emotion even though in a way it's a love poem at the same time it's sad

This is a good poem! i really like it!

This poem is sweet yet sad great write 5/5