In Love With The Sky

by UntilYouBreakMyHeart221   Sep 7, 2008


I have come across a fascinating feeling,
This is a truth, thus not a lie.
I feel like I'm dreaming;
I've fallen in love with the sky.

Your eyes are the size of the moon,
Your smile shines like the stars.
Your laugh is my tune;
You surpass me by far.

I can't stop thinking about you,
You're basically my mind.
I never want to lose you,
You make my life aligned.

Nothing in this life,
Will ever make me regret.
Not a gun, nor knife;
You, I will never forget.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    This is far beyond awesome!!!
    I love the creativity in your piece, its somehow new to the love poems, the average love poems.

    I definitely loved the metaphor here
    Your eyes are the size of the moon,
    Your smile shines like the stars.

    very well written =)
    I guess people lack emotions of love, thats why they didn't pay attention to this poem. don't resent, your piece is beautiful indeed

    Write on =))
    xx