This is far beyond awesome!!!
I love the creativity in your piece, its somehow new to the love poems, the average love poems.

I definitely loved the metaphor here
Your eyes are the size of the moon,
Your smile shines like the stars.

very well written =)
I guess people lack emotions of love, thats why they didn't pay attention to this poem. don't resent, your piece is beautiful indeed

Write on =))
xx