Heart's Desire

Great! although i think if you made a much larger poem while sticking to the same rhyming scheme you could have a masterpiece in your hands.

Loved it! You got what you wanted to say across without using excess words. Very powerful and full of meaning. That is also my hearts desire and everything you expressed, Ive felt making it real easy for me to realte with. Great choice of words....loved it!

Well done.
*5/5*

Omgsh congrats on being top rated!!!! i was like "yeeeehhhhh" when i saw yours here. :)

That was a wow! so sweeet and awesome. very nice job =)

Wow this is really short but its great so much emotion put into such few words great job the first line was great but yeah...5/5