by Vox Sep 7, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Drifting slowly by |
Only if it were so down here. Well done. |
by HidinVictim
This is really good, i never could grasp the whole Haiku thing but this is really good, only one thing i personally think you should change the title so people have to really think about what you could be writing about.... 5/5 |
by xXxemzxXx
Hey this is nice another simple one and you used a form of poetry that is rare these days nice work 5/5 |
Very good. I liked how at ease it made me feel in so few words. Brilliant poem. 5/5 |