Very good. I liked how at ease it made me feel in so few words. Brilliant poem. 5/5

Hey this is nice another simple one and you used a form of poetry that is rare these days nice work 5/5

This is really good, i never could grasp the whole Haiku thing but this is really good, only one thing i personally think you should change the title so people have to really think about what you could be writing about.... 5/5

Only if it were so down here. Well done.