Contemplation

by Vox   Sep 7, 2008


Here I sit,
Peering over the land,
As time ticks by,
With each grain of sand,

Thoughts are creeping,
Into my concious mind,
Convincing me to look,
For something I must find.

Rather, someone,
Not something,
Someone to give,
This diamond ring.

I think I know who,
My heart will choose,
I think that someone...
That someone is you.

So here I sit,
Peering over the land,
Hoping someday,
To slide this ring onto your hand.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I liked the simplicity here. It was short, sweet and to the point making it a wonderful read. So much meaning was packed behind you short lines and there was power in the words you used. I liked the reptitition because it got your message across and the imagery was just perfect.

    Well done.
    *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody is in search of that special somebody and when you finally find them never let go. Excellent poem it was full of love and emotion and I could relate it to my fiancee and I....Great job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by StarGirl

    That was extremely romantic and I loved it! Like a lotta people have said it has amazing flow and the overall feel paints a vivid picture.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Aww.. very sweet =) i love the awesome flow. Amazing job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Awww this is so sweet, i loved the flow and the emotion was touching great job by the way loved the first stanza it set the mood perfectly.... 5/5

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