Comments : Contemplation

  • 16 years ago

    by FlyFF

    Nice poem...nice it caught my attention...
    5/5 [LoSt IdEnTiTy]...

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    That was an amazing poem. I'm very happy to have read it... The concept was brilliant and your word choice was excellent. Not to mention the flawless flow you have.

    Great write! 5/5

    P.S.
    Whoever voted a 4 on this poem is a deuche ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Hey great poem simple but amazing the flow was good and it was a nice read keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Aww so do you know... who this is? or is this just about a future wife you have never met before?

    very great. :) lovely, sir.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Awww this is so sweet, i loved the flow and the emotion was touching great job by the way loved the first stanza it set the mood perfectly.... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Aww.. very sweet =) i love the awesome flow. Amazing job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by StarGirl

    That was extremely romantic and I loved it! Like a lotta people have said it has amazing flow and the overall feel paints a vivid picture.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Everybody is in search of that special somebody and when you finally find them never let go. Excellent poem it was full of love and emotion and I could relate it to my fiancee and I....Great job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I liked the simplicity here. It was short, sweet and to the point making it a wonderful read. So much meaning was packed behind you short lines and there was power in the words you used. I liked the reptitition because it got your message across and the imagery was just perfect.

    Well done.
    *5/5*