by FlyFF
Nice poem...nice it caught my attention... |
That was an amazing poem. I'm very happy to have read it... The concept was brilliant and your word choice was excellent. Not to mention the flawless flow you have. |
by xXxemzxXx
Hey great poem simple but amazing the flow was good and it was a nice read keep it up 5/5 |
by Mishka
Aww so do you know... who this is? or is this just about a future wife you have never met before? |
by HidinVictim
Awww this is so sweet, i loved the flow and the emotion was touching great job by the way loved the first stanza it set the mood perfectly.... 5/5 |
Aww.. very sweet =) i love the awesome flow. Amazing job =) |
by StarGirl
That was extremely romantic and I loved it! Like a lotta people have said it has amazing flow and the overall feel paints a vivid picture. |
Everybody is in search of that special somebody and when you finally find them never let go. Excellent poem it was full of love and emotion and I could relate it to my fiancee and I....Great job 5/5 GG23 |
by Blissful
I liked the simplicity here. It was short, sweet and to the point making it a wonderful read. So much meaning was packed behind you short lines and there was power in the words you used. I liked the reptitition because it got your message across and the imagery was just perfect. |