Comments : To An Unknown Girl

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Oh, this poem is so sweet.... You know how to make a girl special, don't you? If I could would my Prince Charming candidates, you would definitely one of them. :P

    I like the last stanza a lot. Encourage to all the rose buds in this world!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful dreamer, dream with me
    The world is waiting for your melody
    Come out with your graceful song
    Be stand out in the crowded throng

    ^^^How right you are...this world needs beautiful dreamers, who dare to stand out in a crowd.

    Beautifully worded dedication, I truly enjoyed reading:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Nice! Very melodic. Gives one a sense of hope & peace. Good write!

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    What a beautiful poem, it was a pure pleasure to read this it aeemed to just flow from your pe
    If i may remove the word BE from your last line last stanza , its a small mistake but will make your poem perfect . Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Clown

    Gacefully written, beuatifully designed and mastered, i dont have the talents you have from lack of experance and time in doing this. Ive been writting for along time for someone who is only 20 yrs old, 13 years, so i hope to someday reach your level. And so you know, War in the Nation, its actually a poem i wrote on this site along time ago that i accedently deleted, it was one of my first poems on this site and was my most popular one at the time, i put alot of heart and soul into it and i thank you for that comment, ur a wonderful poet and i hope that you continue writting

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    A beautifully crafted poem indeed tt you've written...i really enjoy the read
    i like the verse

    Beautiful dreamer, dream with me
    The world is waiting for your melody

    keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by PoeticLoserface

    I really liked this one. It is great. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Amazing job! im speechless! :) 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    I loved these lines:
    "Beautiful dreamer, dream with me
    The world is waiting for your melody"
    that part is so beautiful, so perfect

  • 15 years ago

    by Biya

    Thats so amazing - i love this one
    5/5
    peace
    biya

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon

    You are very good at rhyme :). This allows for your poem to be quite detailed and unique yet still hold a good structure :)