Comments : Every time when I lie in bed and when the music starts to fade.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mukhunthan.G

    Loved the whole thing....too good to read.....

  • 16 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    Thanks a lot!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    My love still burns for you freely
    just and only for you my baby.

    ^^^who could resist such words? If she does, she must be blind:)

    Great poem, I loved the message, the words and the rhyming:)

    Keep writing Mark:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by i care about him

    Very beautiful poem 5/5
    I completely know what your talking about
    Keep up the good work