That was good =)
definitely loved the last line
"more than rainbows and just butterflies. "
this is just soo romanticccc ;))
a great write hun
keep it up

I only have one advice: split the poem up into stanzas, it would be better looking :)
other than that, I loved your piece
write on xxx

Great!

Great!

Woah. I usually don't like love poetry, but this was just amazing and original. I LOVE IT!! I will continue to read your work.

The Angel of Secrets