Why Am I Feeling Like This? *

by lost in lovee   Sep 8, 2008


Why am I feeling like this?
I have no clue.
Baby I really love you
But I just don't know what to do.

You tell me you love me,
But is it really true?
Words are only words,
You have to show me you mean it too.

Yet you do nothing to show me
Your feelings are real.
I sit at night and cry,
Hoping you feel the way I feel.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ether

    Filler words such as "baby" only work in a poem if they are used with lots of sarcasm, otherwise they sound too cheesy.

    The emotions in this again where there, I just think that you can bring them out a little better. I can't wait to see your writing in another year or so.
    Good poem.

    jess ~

  • 16 years ago

    by Smilie

    Yo dis poem was crack man!! meaning it was greatttttt! lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I'm amazed at how simple and effective this poem is. Your word choice was simple but it held so much emotion. I really felt this poem... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Moon

    It waz really touchy ... deeep meanin ... keep it up ...

  • 16 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol ;p

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