Coloured insanity (Nonet)

by Mr. Darcy   Sep 8, 2008


Suffering pictures bleed black and white,
Visions now ebb from waking sight.
I feel the sun warm my skin,
Cleansing knives once within.
But darkness transforms
To coloured storm,
Clawing pain;
Insane,
Torn.

08.09.08
19.25
M. Moran

A Nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables,
the second line eight syllables, the third line seven
syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes with one
syllable. It can be on any subject and rhyming is optional.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude this poem is a drakness poem about sadness and emotional.....love it truly great work (^_^)

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Its very creative...I love how each line has a certain emotion behind it great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    You did a wonderful job on this form of poetry. The emotions seem to cry from the page. Leaving the reader with painful visions. Word choices and imagery are terriffic.
    Exceelent job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem is excellent. I loved each line. It is sad. This sadness almost scares me. The dark side of us, kept hidden from others... This side exists in all of us. Some of us deny it, some of us show it openly, someone keeps it as a secret.

    Flow was great and I like the dark theme.

    Thanks for introducing a new form of poem.

    Hugs,
    Noor

  • 16 years ago

    by The Shadowlust Inside Me

    Nonet sounds hard so go you lol I thought it was great and thanks for the heads up of what a nonet was i never knew " learn a new thign everday" lol

    Over all
    Great Job

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