Awww...so much sadness within these lines:(
What made you this sad, my friend?
Whatever it was, I hope you will be able to leave it behind you one day.
The poem is beautiful btw, in all it's sadness.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Nonet sounds hard so go you lol I thought it was great and thanks for the heads up of what a nonet was i never knew " learn a new thign everday" lol

Over all
Great Job

This poem is excellent. I loved each line. It is sad. This sadness almost scares me. The dark side of us, kept hidden from others... This side exists in all of us. Some of us deny it, some of us show it openly, someone keeps it as a secret.

Flow was great and I like the dark theme.

Thanks for introducing a new form of poem.

Hugs,
Noor

You did a wonderful job on this form of poetry. The emotions seem to cry from the page. Leaving the reader with painful visions. Word choices and imagery are terriffic.
Exceelent job!
Take Care
Cindy

Its very creative...I love how each line has a certain emotion behind it great job

Dude this poem is a drakness poem about sadness and emotional.....love it truly great work (^_^)