Aw. This poem is beautiful. I'm sure if your friend sees this, they'll absolutely love it.

"side by side we walk along,
teaching me whats right and wrong,"

-- "Whats" should be "what's". Because "what's" = what is. Therefore, "..me what's right.." = "..me what is right..".

That's the only thing I found wrong in the piece. It's short, and it's simple, but straight to the point. Good job.

Five out of five. [5/5]

This is a sweet tribute to friendship

Wow one of the best ..no actually the best friendship poem i have ever heard i think u should enter it in a contest i know you would win ......