Great poem but for the record you and sharp objects dont F,u,c,king go together! so please let the above poem be fictional.

I really like the way this was written though I can believe anyone that was falling to hell
would find a bright side

It reminded me of song that my nephew started Never let me into heaven

maybe the bright side is that you are not falling right now
I did not count off for the typo
I begin to slop from the thread, i fall to hell
because you must have been somewhat feeling the intesity of slipping from a thread
never to late while the light is above our head
but feelings are niether moral nor immora it is what to do with them that makes the difference despair is not the end but is quite dangerous and this poem reflects that well