Emptiness

I love the whole ghost concept. very moving and emotional. Ive alwaysed wondered if a ghost has unfinished business-like love.lol.
great job.
love your work.

victoria

I really liked this poem. Esp how the first and last stanza had the sames lines... except for the fourth line which ends the poem with " a lost love I seek..." which to me is the meaning of the whole poem, Lol. You feel empty, beaten, weathered, falling apart in search of that love. A well written and poem with good use of words to express these empty feelings. Loved it :)

Such a sad poem, but very deep and powerful. i loved it. keep on writing. Shanik

This was good. beautifully written. beautiful emotions and depth.
--lovedroughtmelody

Very emotional write. Poem of loneliness and sorrow. Good to read. well done!