I liked this it was really good hun! keep up the good work and write more!!!

Very emotional write. Poem of loneliness and sorrow. Good to read. well done!

This was good. beautifully written. beautiful emotions and depth.
--lovedroughtmelody

Such a sad poem, but very deep and powerful. i loved it. keep on writing. Shanik

I really liked this poem. Esp how the first and last stanza had the sames lines... except for the fourth line which ends the poem with " a lost love I seek..." which to me is the meaning of the whole poem, Lol. You feel empty, beaten, weathered, falling apart in search of that love. A well written and poem with good use of words to express these empty feelings. Loved it :)

I love the whole ghost concept. very moving and emotional. Ive alwaysed wondered if a ghost has unfinished business-like love.lol.
great job.
love your work.

victoria