Love and Cellophane

by Michael D Nalley   Sep 9, 2008


While I try to love you wrapped in cellophane
You package your transparent passion too
Ecstasy is a pleasure so difficult to contain

My heart beats hard with images in my brain
As I make those romantic gestures to you
While I try to love you wrapped in cellophane

It seems that my efforts are all in vain
Though sensual excitement comes through
Ecstasy is a pleasure so difficult to contain

My soul has a mind that I can never explain
Our hearts forever search for love that's true
While I try to love you wrapped in cellophane

If we are so protected why do we feel pain?
Is love meant to be confined, or shared by two?
Ecstasy is a pleasure so difficult to contain

Preserving is fruitful, yet goes against the grain
Of the natural laws that are nothing new
While I try to love you wrapped in cellophane
Ecstasy is a pleasure so difficult to contain

This villanelle was inspired by lost love
A villanelle is a poetic form which entered English-language poetry in the 1800s from the imitation of French models.[1] A villanelle has only two rhyme sounds. The first and third lines of the first stanza are rhyming refrains that alternate as the third line in each successive stanza and form a couplet at the close. A villanelle is nineteen lines long, consisting of five tercets and one concluding quatrain. [2

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    What a beautiful love poem! Although it was about lost love, I truly enjoyed reading it. You pack so much meaning behind your words making it an unforgettable piece. It was unique and original. So refreshing to see something new on this site making it want to read it again and again. Well done, you had me captivated from beginning to end.

    *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I find love to be so mysterious and impossible to understand at times. When we think we are in love it turns out to be just lust, and when it appears to be lust if given an oppertunity to become something more it turns into love. It's a shame it's impossible to live without because sometimes I wish I could be happy without it. Great job as always 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow your poem had pure originality and i enjoyed this poem very much, its very hard for me to find good love poems because they can be repetitive but yours created quite a picture and i really loved your imagery which caputered me. nice work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    Great!

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