by Michael D Nalley Sep 9, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
While I try to love you wrapped in cellophane |
by Blissful
What a beautiful love poem! Although it was about lost love, I truly enjoyed reading it. You pack so much meaning behind your words making it an unforgettable piece. It was unique and original. So refreshing to see something new on this site making it want to read it again and again. Well done, you had me captivated from beginning to end. |
I find love to be so mysterious and impossible to understand at times. When we think we are in love it turns out to be just lust, and when it appears to be lust if given an oppertunity to become something more it turns into love. It's a shame it's impossible to live without because sometimes I wish I could be happy without it. Great job as always 5/5 GG23 |
Wow your poem had pure originality and i enjoyed this poem very much, its very hard for me to find good love poems because they can be repetitive but yours created quite a picture and i really loved your imagery which caputered me. nice work 5/5 |
by MarkKicher
Great! |