Your poem would be more complete if you were to add a day or month or something at the beginning of the first line for example:

August, that is when all trouble started

Now people don't know which moment in time you are referring to.

The poem is really well written, I must say:)
I will come back in the future to see how you are doing:)
It feels kinda special I get to be the first one to comment and vote on your work after a really bizarre start, he he.

Take care!

Ingrid