Never but still I endure

by MarkKicher   Sep 9, 2008


Never but still I endure

Everlasting, best describes this love
totally undoubted I am, it is from above.
Though this heart aches
I would still do everything for your sake.

Our break up was dreadful
made my life miserably awful.
Still I survived to stand
without their helping hand.

I stood up and smiled
just like a curious little child.
Hoped for the best to come
uncertain of what it is to come.

Shot after shot I tried
you still give no tide.
Pain in the heart I endured
with every no as replied.

But still, here is your lover thee
Willing to try and plea.
Your never will not matter
Because I can endure forever.

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  • 14 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    @abstrusity

    thanks a lot, I didn't notice that until you mentioned it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aw, very sweet poem.

    my only suggestion is,
    "Our broke up was dreadful"
    might sound better if you replace 'broke up' with 'break up'

    but lovely poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    Thanks a lot guys!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ravi

    Appreciable. Its ur experience which speaks.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Lost love is one of the most painful. Good work :)