Comments : Never but still I endure

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Lost love is one of the most painful. Good work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ravi

    Appreciable. Its ur experience which speaks.

  • 16 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    Thanks a lot guys!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aw, very sweet poem.

    my only suggestion is,
    "Our broke up was dreadful"
    might sound better if you replace 'broke up' with 'break up'

    but lovely poem. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by MarkKicher

    @abstrusity

    thanks a lot, I didn't notice that until you mentioned it.