Daaaaaannng!! You tell em!!

perfect ryme! lol :]

5/5

Lol ur lil end comment was funny but it is good!!
weird, when i was reading it, it seemed so much like something i'd write!
and i kno so many people can relate!
good job!

Hey awsome poem keep it up okay (^_^) 5/5

It's a rap song, not a poem, how sad.

I like it its how i feel about these girls out here sometimes they always running they mouth but they dont ever want to say it to my face

This is such a good poem! lol i would tell her that 2 her face.

That is a good poem keep on writing