The Sun

by Ashley B   Sep 9, 2008


And i can feel the pain inside

boiling outta me like the heat from the sun

knowing what i knew then

just now have i begun

to face the reality

you took a part of me

but that's just fine you see

because you're not the one.

No you're not the one

I scream and I shout

just to let it all out

let me bleed and forget what you were about

all those times i stood by your side

knowing you were only here for the ride

it was me that denied the truth

the truth about you

No you're not the one

no you're not the one

so i'll move on

and one day you'll see

what it feels like to be

the heat coming from the sun

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Wow i really like this... it's sad... and i love the ending. you poor thing i am sorry this person decieved you.
    take care. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FaithHopeNLove

    I love the analogy! Its perfect and suits your poem very well. Simple, yet effective. Good flow. I like the repition of lines. The subject is so common, im sure everyone can relate. Overall, great job!