Familiar Gray

by Ignoris   Sep 9, 2008


Falling gently into despair
Searching for the slightest tear
Look around but all I see
Familiar gray, a lockless key

Walking through these hollow walls
Listen close, an angel calls
Imaginary, as if a dream
Familiar gray, not what it seems

Searching for a color bright
Maybe even endless light
But then of course, when nothing shows
Familiar gray, a fading rose

Waiting for a day anew
This time of mine soon overdue
A day when I can mold my clay
So it won't stay familiar gray

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  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    Excellent write! The rhythm was perfect as also the rhymes.The content was very interesting ,I guess we have all felt like things were a dull gray at times. an excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    You have an amazing talent with flow and the right words. It's a sad poem, but it's a god one. I personally really liked the second and third stanza, and the last two lines.
    This poem gave me shivers. I hope you keep writing amazing work.
    Krystal.

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