Comments : The Fatal Words, (edited)

  • 16 years ago

    by The Shadowlust Inside Me

    I liked your word choice and your title kinda drew me in. I felt what your poem surgested I relate to it so for that i thank you.

    Great work
    Gaige.

  • 16 years ago

    by mommytobe

    Your poem really hits home with me. i lost my boyfriend about two weeks ago to my best friend.

  • Well this poem was great it really ht home with me i loved it.